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NOTES: Today was one of those days that the power of the brain amazed me. I blinked and found two chapters on my computer screen. That must mean we're closing in on the objective. I won't ramble today except to remind you to let me know what loose ends you think I'm forgetting about. I ain't perfect :) Enjoy today's installments...  (CAUTION: The following contains unedited material that may be unsuitable for the grammatically inclined. Keep in mind that I don’t review what I write until after the first draft of the whole novel is done, so please keep your spelling and grammar fixes until the Beta Reader rounds.) Content Removed For Publishing
14 Comments
Len Powell
1/28/2015 03:58:31 am
Incredible story line. Keep it up!!
Laura
1/28/2015 04:10:30 am
Spectacular!
Alex Howard
1/28/2015 04:11:21 am
Hoo man!
Judy Stone
1/28/2015 04:26:24 am
Well, alrighty then. Things are heating up, and I can't wait for you to toss a match toward the kindling. Think of the glorious weenie roast we'll have over the roaring bonfire. Make the scumbags pay, Carlos.
G. Younger
1/28/2015 04:49:18 am
It is so easy to be swept up with the suspense of this story! I find myself waiting for the chapters. These two are terrific!
Vin
1/28/2015 06:09:45 am
TJG has to be monitoring that phone so they now know about that call.
Susan
1/28/2015 06:18:30 am
Wow! Another two great chapters! Now I have to wonder if they suspected Rick was involved and were testing him to see where he would lead them or if they have no idea that he is involved. Can't wait to read what happens tomorrow!
Matt
1/28/2015 06:56:34 am
I think it is time for the Bulgarians to come in and do a "Wet Operation". Great writing!!
Jerry Lovett
1/28/2015 07:50:35 am
Two very intertaning chapters. I hope you have this guy under Cal's radar pretty soon?
Marsha
1/28/2015 08:21:35 am
Two comments......WOW and ARRRGGGHHH!!! I love being part of this family and helping "write" these books but it sure is hard when I can't just flip the page to the next chapter.
Sandy K
1/28/2015 10:20:55 am
Fantastic chapters..really heating things up and setting it all into play. I know Neil will find the goods on Chapman and as stated already, has probably been monitoring the phones. Time for Cal and the TJG to kick ads!
Sonya
1/28/2015 11:08:53 am
Does the book HAVE to end this week? Couldn't it go on for another?
Donna
1/28/2015 01:47:24 pm
I'm with Sonya, not ready for you to end this yet! The bad guys can't have enough bad karma come at them. They shouldn't mess with our Marines and the American way ! Leave a Reply. |
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