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Chain of Command: Chapters 22 & 23

1/21/2015

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NOTES: Not much to say except that I'm loving the comments. Let's see if we can tie up some loose ends...
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15 Comments
Jim Guthrie
1/21/2015 03:55:50 am

Well...looks like maybe Cal, & co. are gonna get closer to seeing that Republican Congressman - I don't even want to have his name in my brain - and the others plotting against the Corps to get their way. Man, yyouve done a helluva book (so far), AGAIN!! Kudos, Mr. Cooper! Excellent work!

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sonya
1/21/2015 04:04:01 am

OH MY GOSH! YOU ARE KILLING ME!!! i get so wrapped up in these chapters like this and then they suddenly come to an end!! i'm sitting here bored at work and NEEDING to get on with this book. its one of those that leaves me wanting more! thank you!

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Laura
1/21/2015 04:23:32 am

You are doing awesome at bringing all the little pieces together. I like how you keep honor and integrity in the characters and how it help the General stay focused and not cave and also it helps Mrs. Elwood know where to turn to as well as her realizing more about who her husband truly was and that she also played a role in their Marine life together, even when she did not see it that way.

I'm more than ready to see Cal and company kick into action.

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Teresa Anderson
1/21/2015 04:39:05 am

Love it. So glad you are writing 2 chapters at a time. Feels like your story is wrapped tighter. I like that there are more directions of the story and they are coming faster. I'm kept on the edge of my seat and I want more.

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G. Younger
1/21/2015 05:03:54 am

Okay, now we get to take at least one breath! However, the suspense is enormous. I, for one, am ready for some hard-hitting action, Mr. Cooper ...take no prisoners, please!

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Chuck O'Malley link
1/21/2015 05:17:15 am

WOW!!! These are great! You've wrapped so much into these chapters in a very subtle manner. Looks like the door is opening for Cal et al.

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Neill Woodward Sr
1/21/2015 05:58:53 am

A dirt nap for all the bad guys. sounds good to me and for the SOB from the last chapter I HOPE HE LOSES HIS BUSINESS AND HIS LIFE!!!!

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Susan
1/21/2015 06:28:11 am

Finally Cal and the team are free to get doing what they do best. Love the idea of the freshman diary being a key. Can't wait for more!

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Judy Stone
1/21/2015 07:39:18 am

Excellent! Glad Mrs. Ellwood found a vital key to the puzzle. Now if Diane or her contacts dig up proof and/or clues to the identity of the culprits.

Side note: Her contacts informed her of threats against Cal that NO ONE knew. Are they high-level hackers? Is she?

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Mark
1/21/2015 08:28:55 am

Great chapters, and Cal and Co. now have the green light and I like that it's all starting to come together. I'm left looking for a kick-ass ending to this incredible book and hope there is a big break through on Diane's part with her intelligence background.

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Marsha
1/21/2015 08:52:19 am

GENIUS!! These chapters were great. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have some thoughts about Mrs. Ellwood, but I think I'll keep them to myself as they might not be too popular.

Anyway, no asides tonight, just kudos to you on the way this book is going.

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Jerry Lovett
1/21/2015 09:50:20 am

You have our attention with these two chapters, now lets get something done with political people.

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Vin
1/21/2015 09:47:53 pm

I couldn't figure out how you were going to get enough information to TJG to get them on the trail of the bad guys. This was brilliant! Not only makes sense and good timing but it also gives the wife an opportunity to feel that she had participated in the end resolution.

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Christy link
1/22/2015 12:54:01 am

Carlos:

Great chapters. I was about six chapters behind and I read all six while waiting in the vet's office! I love the twist! Keep it coming!

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Alex Howard
1/22/2015 01:56:06 am

Great Stuff!
-a.

PS: Got my work cut out for me when you go to proofing ... 8-;

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