NOTES: Not much to say today. The story is taking on a life of its own. Just like you I'm hanging on for the ride. Enjoy... Content Removed For Publishing
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Alex Howard
1/19/2015 03:04:46 am
Okay, two very good chapters. They made me very angry!
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Don Hoffman
1/19/2015 03:10:31 am
Hang on for the ride, indeed! This coordinated attack, both in our capitol and on foreign soil, leaves me almost speechless. I am sure the General has plans for Congressman Steiner, and hopefully McKnight. I am also sure that Cal and TJG will find a way to avenge the deaths of their Marine brethren. You have certainly gotten our attention with these chapters. I went back and re-read National Burden, to remind myself what a sleaze McKnight was; hopefully he will be seen for what he is and dealt with soon.
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G. Youngerl
1/19/2015 03:20:09 am
I know this for sure, Cal and his team are going to be very angry and the culprits won't have a chance. I am looking forward to the finale!
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Jerry Lovett
1/19/2015 03:22:52 am
I agree with Alex and i'm also angry at the killings of our guys.
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Alex Howard
1/19/2015 07:19:14 am
I love the way those who have never served denigrate those of us who have. They have no idea what commitment, teamwork, and honor mean, but they look to put down the people who do understand ...
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Rebecca Wall
1/19/2015 04:29:29 am
Wow! This whole book has kept me on the edge of my seat but these two chapters are excellent! At first I thought that McKnight was playing along with Steiner but then I realized that they weren't. I can't wait to see the both of them go down for what they are doing to the Marines! And heaven help those people who started the stuff that killed those marines in Afghanistan and Iraq. They will wish they were dead once Cal and TJG get their hands on them! That "side" of Daniel just might come out! I can't wait to read more if the book!!!!
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Karen Lee
1/19/2015 05:23:27 am
OH MY FREAKIN WOW....I am so wanting to show off some PTSD crazy right now...AND go get some payback for my betrayed brothers....just had to keep reminding myself. That this not real it is just a book! Great Chapters Carlos.
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Laura
1/19/2015 05:24:02 am
Holy Cow! Nothing like starting the week off with a big bang. All the emotions are running wild in my head and none of them are good. I'm more than ready to see some big time ass kicking from Cal and team as well as the General who needs his time also. Looking forward to seeing how you tie this all up.
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Judy Stone
1/19/2015 06:01:48 am
Gulp...powerful chapters and the unprovoked attacks ticked me off. Don Hoffman said it better than I could. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Susan
1/19/2015 06:26:08 am
Was not expecting that! The way those guys were attacked and killed makes me mad. Yes I know it's just a book but it's hard not to get your emotions involved. I just hope that those involved are found and punished for their betrayal.
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Mark
1/19/2015 07:43:23 am
I agree with everyone else, what a way to start the week, great chapters. I can see 5 star reviews for this book, what a page turner. I have to remind myself it's a story and a great one at that. I look forward to Cal and the Generals reactions to the events that are unfolding.
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Marsha
1/19/2015 08:19:10 am
Boy, Cooper, you sure do know how to piss a lot of people off! Me included! I knew when "Dan" came into the camp it was going to end badly. I don't guess I'll ever understand how any American can show such disregard for those that fight for our freedom like we see today. It's so wrong on so many levels.
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Neill Woodward Sr
1/19/2015 09:18:01 am
These 2 chapters really made my blood boil. I cant wait to what else you have in store for us
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Sandy K
1/19/2015 10:50:22 am
Definitely did not expect that. "Dan" ' really pissed me off. This guy and the Congressman have to burn! Cal and the THE have their work cut out for them. Powerful chapters!
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Teresa Anderson
1/19/2015 12:43:06 pm
OMG!!! I was freaking out over the assassin "Dan". At first I thought it was Daniel until he killed the Marine. All I can say where will this go and how will it end. OMG
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Vin
1/19/2015 11:09:32 pm
In most of your stories you have at least one person who we learn to love to hate. Dan is the man in this one. He is the one who gets my vote for a slow roast over an open fire. Actually, given there are multiple posts that were overrun I believe there are probably a lot of Dan's out there betraying those they are station with. Build a BIG fire, there has to be room for more than one.
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sonya
1/20/2015 05:14:12 am
what everyone else said! WOW! this last chapter caught me totally off guard! cant wait til cal and his merry band take care of this 'dan'!
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Matt
1/26/2015 06:24:03 am
I was at the SHOT Show last week, so I am just catching up. That is one place where Americas Heroes, Military and LEO, are honored. There were many brave people and their service dogs. I had the pleasure of meeting Marc Lees mother and brother and getting my copy of "American Sniper" from her. Liberals do not want to sacrifice, so they belittle those that do!
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G.Younger
1/26/2015 07:53:37 am
Your trip to SHOT sounds inspiring. You are right about liberals, and dog-gone-it, I am afraid they are running the country!
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