NOTES: Shorter installment today as I prep for the final week. Let me know in the Comments section what you think should happen in the grand finale... Content Removed For Publishing
17 Comments
Judy Stone
1/22/2015 04:27:57 am
Yowza! And you're only giving us ONE chapter today? It's a doozie, but holy smokes! Now I'll spend the evening worrying about the guys.
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Vin
1/22/2015 05:27:30 am
I HATE these short chapters!!!!
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Laura
1/22/2015 05:34:53 am
The twist just keep coming. Wow! I think this is turning out to be the best book yet. Who is after them now? Will Gaucho be alright? When can they start taking out the bad guys? How should this all end? Looking forward to another chapter tomorrow to last through the weekend. Great job.
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sonya
1/22/2015 06:07:13 am
worried about gaucho!! please let him be okay!!!
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Neill Woodward Sr
1/22/2015 07:40:17 am
1st. The congressman's involvement becomes knowledge. 2) The sob's who murdered the marines are found and killed in a firefight.3) Everyone in Cal's car is ok and gets some payback!!!! That is all for now but i will think of some other things to help you finish this book. So far a great read and i have told some of my friends to download you free books to see if they get as hooked as i did on your writing. GREAT JOB!!
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G. Younger
1/22/2015 08:03:17 am
Mr. Woodword, Sr. is, as usual, right on target! I would add hard prison time for the fancy congressman. I think he would fit right in! Yes, death by fire fight for the others...a slow painful death.
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Sandy K
1/22/2015 08:27:07 am
Not Gaucho! I agree with Mr. Woodward, time for payback and let Cal and TJG get the bastards! Now they are seeing the conspiracy and the players...time to get busy! Great chapter.....on the edge waiting for the next.
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1/22/2015 08:59:02 am
You have me pacing. Let them find the one who started this and play his game in the background the way he likes to play. Please let the team be ok. They've lost enough.
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Caroline W
1/22/2015 09:04:13 am
Oh WOW now I cannot wait for the rest of the book Mr. Copper. You are driving me nuts and NOT Gaucho please.
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Karen Lee
1/22/2015 09:07:58 am
Somebody has to be able to connect that slimey congressman MsKnight...unless you are saving him for another go round...in a future novel.
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Marsha
1/22/2015 09:51:44 am
Is it just me, or is anyone else concerned that the NCIS agent is a bad guy? I mean, I know he went through all that with Briggs when they were shot at, but nothing ever really happened to them and it could have just been done to throw them off the agent's involvement. I just don't trust him for some reason, but I've been known to be wrong before.
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Jerry Lovett
1/22/2015 11:52:34 am
Wow this is a surprise, can't hardly wait for next chapter.
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Collette
1/22/2015 08:01:20 pm
Anger, shock and vengeance are forefront in my mind. My heart aches to think of the traitors in our government. Cal and all his guys need to be ok because justice is required for the dead marines and Cal's group is the strike force to do that job and no good guy can blame Cal's group for letting some vengeance color the justice. Goucho is only stunned, thanks to the under armor he's wearing and Daniel will be the one to not only silence the other sniper but the money man and congressman as well as they meet to plan further mayhem.
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Rebecca
1/22/2015 10:19:00 pm
Holy Cow!!! The suspense is killing me!!! This is so close to how our government really works that it is mind blowing!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I really hope that McKnight gets what's coming to him!
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Vin
1/23/2015 12:58:10 am
It is a sad commentary on how this country is run, or how we perceive it being run, that so many of us see this story as plausible. It is time we all stand up, no matter what party, and push for some fundamental changes that will eliminate the "professional politicians" and their life long cronies and advisers, all of whom are more concerned about being reelected and lining their pockets than they are about taking care of the country and their constituents.
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G.Younger
1/24/2015 04:16:12 am
Vin.....amen!
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Matt
1/27/2015 02:08:49 am
Outstanding!!!!
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