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NOTES: A shorter chapter before the weekend. The next two weeks will be the big push to the finale. Who's ready?  Content Removed For Publishing
13 Comments
G. Younger
1/16/2015 04:14:15 am
So, we have jealousy, money, and power driving this axis of evil! I am not sure I understand how the money part is expected to play out, but, I am sure I will know soon! Mr. Cooper, although I have mentioned this before, I want to do so again. You do bad guys so very well!!
Judy Stone
1/16/2015 06:16:20 am
Holy smokes! I'm going to need a list to keep all the bad guys straight. So, is Glen Whitworth the brains and money behind this plot? Or is there someone more despicable lurking in the shadows?
Vin
1/16/2015 06:23:07 am
I don't think this is going the way I thought it would, or you are taking us the long, round about way of getting there if it is.
Laura
1/16/2015 06:31:48 am
Well, you definately know how to keep us wanting more and getting us to re-read past chapters to see if I know where you are leading us. Some things I think I have spot on then you throw in chapters like this and now I have to wonder. Great job keeping me guessing and patiently waiting to for.
Judy Stone
1/16/2015 07:22:07 am
Sigh. I freely admit that I'm a newbie. HOW do I reread previous chapters? I've wanted to do that numerous times but couldn't figure out how. Was I not supposed to delete the previous links? Sorry if this is too preposterous to add to the thread.
Karen Lee
1/16/2015 07:53:56 am
Welcome to the group Judy...to read previous excerpts go to the bottom of any excerpt to the archives click onto the desired month and the the excerpt you desire to read.
CGC
1/16/2015 08:44:16 am
You can also go to the very bottom left hand corner of the page and click the "previous" link. You'll have to keep doing that to get back to the beginning.
Vin
1/17/2015 09:30:42 pm
Another way...
Matt
1/16/2015 07:11:15 am
So, the little fish, that thought he was a big fish in a big pool, is finding out he is a little fish in a great white shark infested ocean! lol I love it!
Karen Lee
1/16/2015 08:06:31 am
And the plot thickens....I know there is a curve ball coming up. And I can't wait to see if I am tracking this.
Mark
1/16/2015 09:17:03 am
Another great chapter with "what's coming next", I'm wondering if Mr. Whitworth is the head of the snake or if we are going still higher!!
Marsha
1/16/2015 10:13:22 am
I can definitely say I didn't see this coming. About the only way I can see this falling apart for the villains is for the different branches involved in this plot to start distrusting each other and it implodes.
Sandy K
1/16/2015 10:43:34 am
Another great twist and introduction of the players and their plot. You, as usual, keep us wandering just what will happen next. Excellent! Leave a Reply. |
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