29 Comments
Marsha
8/31/2015 06:38:54 am
Good start!!
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Leola
9/3/2015 03:24:33 pm
Terrific start, held my interest from the first paragraph. Waiting for the twists to start!
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Kathryn Andresen
8/31/2015 06:43:47 am
New characters and suspense right at the start. Going to be a very interesting novel.
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Richardeahern
8/31/2015 06:56:43 am
Outstanding start
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Mark
8/31/2015 07:23:36 am
Great start C.G., I like a read that gets right into to story and leaves you wondering from the get go.
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Laura
8/31/2015 07:45:02 am
Good start Carlos. Ready to see where you take us from here.
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Bob
8/31/2015 07:45:57 am
So far no twists and turns. But I'm sure this is the lull before the storm.
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8/31/2015 08:07:00 am
New People and Country. This is starting to look like an interesting book.
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Andrea
8/31/2015 08:20:57 am
First off, love the book cover. Promises nonstop action - your designer is superb.
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Vicki Cuccia
8/31/2015 08:27:31 am
This is a wonderful start and has made me hungry for more!
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Anne
8/31/2015 08:38:43 am
So glad to be reading another amazing book. Can't wait for the twists and turns to begin.
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Susan Humphreys
8/31/2015 08:51:42 am
I can't wait to read more. I love all of your books.
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RKB
8/31/2015 09:16:50 am
I enjoyed the first chapter and am ready to read the next. Great opening with almost limitless ways to go from here.
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Darrell
8/31/2015 09:27:49 am
I like the start. Good tension and intrigue.
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Rebecca
8/31/2015 09:39:53 am
Awesome start! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Caroline
8/31/2015 10:58:35 am
Yeah!!! a new book and you start right in LOVE IT...
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G.Younger
8/31/2015 11:01:30 am
Hmmm...Iranian or Russian or....? At first l wondered if these guys could be from the Jefferson group. But no, not with the green eyes. Anyway, l am hoping Cal is getting his head on straight and the JG is ready to ride. I am SO looking forward to this book!
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Nothing like jumping right in the black void? Makes you want to guess who and what and when all at the same time. Real life example of how everything is twisting and turning preventing the main character from seeing a way out? Great question Carlos as to how these three characters know everything about the Doctor and the reader does not ? Right now most readers are praying that the
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Faye
8/31/2015 11:56:28 am
Great opening chapter. Looking forward to your twists and turns. Also looking forward to getting TJG back to work. Hope Cal has gotten his mind back on the job.
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Philip
8/31/2015 12:23:47 pm
Great start - enough detail to set the scene and many unanswered questions to keep us wanting more.
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Jerry Lovett
8/31/2015 12:41:44 pm
The start of another great C G Cooper book!!!
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Roshan Ashok
8/31/2015 01:20:03 pm
An awesome start just like CG Style. Plunging in the story line and making waves. This is going to be an interesting novel as usual. Waiting for the next chapter
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Mary Sheerin
8/31/2015 02:59:12 pm
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Peg Kelly
9/1/2015 09:01:12 am
Carlos, as usual I'm the last to read... Agree with most of the comments. Amazing start. Book opens quickly with just enough suspense to keep the new reader to your works ( or a reader familiar with your books) wanting more. Someone willing to buy the book based on the amazing cover and first few pages. Good job. I'd buy it.
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Kathy
9/1/2015 09:15:02 am
All I can contribute now is to echo the others. Excellent beginning
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Richard Ahern
9/1/2015 09:16:06 am
I am completely stressed n my personal life, my wife has stage 3 Parkinson's and I can't work because I am a 24/7caregiver. My time out relaxation is a few minutes with the Zimmer.
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Vin
9/1/2015 01:09:37 pm
Good start. We know something is happening but don't know what, who, or why. That leaves us wanting to know the answers.
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Sandy K
9/2/2015 11:39:04 am
Good start, immediately drawing us in and hooking us, making us wanting to know more!
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Pam
10/4/2015 04:44:51 am
sounds like it's going to be a great fast moving book can't for next chapters
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